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Ashfur's death Contest

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Poor Ashfur, I'm going to cry.. :( This is for the contest of :iconwarriorcatsclaim:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Who knew death scenes could be bloody,cute, and cool at the same time <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>
You could have shown a few more marks on ashfur and hollyleaf because they fought and he left a few marks on her as well and ashfur got beat up a lot not just one scratch/ bite and She should have more blood on her though
for vision I give it a 3 and a half because I know its hard to see stuff in this way sometimes for originality I give it a 2 and a half technique I give 4 and a half and Impact I give 4 this is one of the better ones Ive seen